What used to be...

Subject: What used to be... Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:21 pm

This pain, This sadness
Its not of you
Its of me

Its of my choices
Or the lack of good ones
For my choice of you
Was indeed a mistake

Or was it?
I remember the time we had
The friends we shared
The secrets we told

The good times…
The bad times…
But the funny thing is
When the bad happen
I think of the good

I guess I'm trying to say
Is that …
Ill forget the good times
But I'll never forget the bad

But sometimes,
I for the tiniest of moments
I was brought back to the time
When we would laugh
And cry, and hurt for the other

But now…
you've probably forgotten
Though I doubt it be so,
We'll try to make mends
But the wounds to deep
To deep for just these stitches

But if we can reconnect the bond
Under the skin
Maybe then….
Maybe then we can be friends

For remember I will
Always love you
And be glad to take a bullet
For what used to be

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Basically this is just something i wrote after one of my best friends and i stopped talking to each other after a huge fight. Hmm seemed something appropriate for my first post on this site Very Happy

I hope to have fun on here!

Subject: Re: What used to be... Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:46 pm

I liked it :3
And I hope you have fun on here, too. Aha~

Subject: Re: What used to be... Mon Oct 18, 2010 5:06 pm

Thanks

And i will!

Posts : 5 Join date : 2010-10-18

I very much likey:D It was really good. You've got some talent my friend :] But yes very very good. Too bad I'm not too good at this stuff:P

Subject: Re: What used to be... Sun Oct 24, 2010 9:52 am

Thanks sooo much! Very Happy

I may put more of them up here, since i got some great feedback :3